| "Yu-gi-oh, holiday to hell island." Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 05:09 CDT
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The shounen-ai tactic can never be forgotten can it? Nah just kidding, great fic. Although it would've been better if they had taken tea and shoved her off into the middle of the ocean.
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Reviewed By: twitching yuugi-loving mess On: May 06, 2005 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! What an evil fanfic! Poor Yuugi. He's so small!^-^ Well, Your story is very cool. I thought that Seto was supposed to be smart, but he had a cell phone the whole damn time! Heh. baka. That was funny, but I wish that you slaughtered Tea like a pig. CLOWNS!!! AAAAAHHHHH!!! ignore me, I'm just munted. I'm not afraid of clowns, I'm afraid of black cats. I ADORE YUUGI!!! NOW YOU KNOW. i'll shut up now.
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 19:53 CDT
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^^ Awesome. I love the insanity. Truly awesome. Hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Jake blackthorn On: April 22, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was horrifyingly disgusting!!! do a kill tea fic and I'll review.
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Title: I enjoyed this wonderful fic!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a excellent story. I'm hoping for a sequel of this. I'm wondering where they can go on their next vacation. To Hawaii, the Caribbeans,the Bahamas or Jamacia? Hmmm... you choose since it's your story. I enjoyed reading this story. All 10s for you!! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* WAAAAAAH! I DON'T WANT IT TO BE OVER!!!! *calms down* dude, ur such a cool writer! and i REALLY hope you make a sequel and make it sooooon! ill be waiting eagerly :D and i still don't fully understand the hatemail thing LMAO. haha, i loved that one part at the end where Mokuba's like "...and I read that pink book you keep in your deskdrawer filled with poems about Jo…" lol. anyways, really awesome story! (and notice the all-10 rating i gave you :D)
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Title: This story is great!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:57 CDT
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Seto,you dumbass!! Why didn't you tell them that you had a cellphone with you?! Talk about being so dense!! I have to say is that this story is getting good. Hope Tea will die and be banished in the Shadow Realm for life by the yamis,who have dark powers. Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil bishi hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a genius! this is so funny i had to go to the bathroom 7 times. I loved it! bakura:Seth is such an idiot! He could have saved us alot of pain especially for me! I promise I will get back at Marik for that. LBH:Thank you so much. my day has been thouraly enjoyable because of this.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, i still love the whole "ryou hates clowns" thing. i hate 'em too - once, we were at the mall and there was this clown goin around huggin people and i was like "MOM, GET ME OUTTA HERE NOW!!!" lol, anyways, update soon! i love this story!
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 14:49 CDT
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Okay,I know what Seth is thinking. He wants to be perverted with Ishizu and Isis. Make sure Malik keeps his eyes on him at all time so he doesn't do anything bad. My idea is that when they enter the mansion, they have to tip toe quietly so they don't set off any traps, for example friendship traps *shivers* that's all that I can think of. Also it was not a hate letter? It was a love letter? I'm confused... Update!!!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so if it wasn't a hate letter, then was it... *gasp* omg! you mean it was supposta be a love letter, but in a discreet way? sorta?? somethin like that??? my GAWD, i'm confused! (pardon the weirdness and slight immaturity - you know how some of these days are lol :P)... btw, cool chapter!
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Title: *sweatdrop*
Reviewed By: Meowzy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 18:25 CDT
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uhm... you did get the fact that it was the complete opposite of hatemail right? jeez, i tried so hard with the Not love in the end of the letter. nobody got the joke! weeeh! (also, sorry i didnt update today. had some lame-o party)
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Title: You must continue!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 15:59 CDT
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I can't believe that Kaiba sent a hate letter to Joey. He needs to learn proper respect somehow. Also,Mokuba convincing his babysitter to clean the mansion with him? Well, he can pay double as long as he behaves well. Update!!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, i guess mokuba got some help after all. or, maybe it's too early to assume... i still can't get over how stupid seto was to send joey a freakin hate letter!!! lmao. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! SETO IS SUCH A FREAKIN IDIOT !!! LMFAO!!!! Hmph, so much for Mr. 'I have an IQ of five hundred' haha, it's more like Mr. 'Abolutely no common sense'. haaaaahaaaaaa, anyways, i'm starting to absolutely LOVE this story! and i love how you update really often - keep up the great work!
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Title: I smell trouble!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:02 CDT
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Uh-oh!! Mokuba is in trouble big time!!! Hope he has his maids help him clean the mansion before Seto gets back from his trip. Also,have Seto's bodyguards help too and Mokuba promises them to pay them good money. This story is too hilarious and please continue.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:03 CDT
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Tea needs help. Literally! Well, great story and hope you update.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* much better on the funniness (if that's a word lol) and length. good idea on making everyone think it was pegasus, then springing that stupid *censored* lol. anyways, much improvement - update soon!
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Title: Not Tea!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 16:09 CDT
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Tea?!?! TEA?!?!!! Not that stupid friendship girl again!!!! I thought it would be Pegasus. My idea for the next chapter can be that when the hikaris and the yamis go minature golfing, they pretend they go along with it and when Tea is not looking, they can make a run for it and Tea is too dumb to notice anything becasue she is a ditz and she can be a bubble head. Hope you continue this fic!! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 18:33 CDT
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I guess the person who walked in is Pegasus. I know other people are guessing it's him! I just know it. Hey, great fic and continue! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 17:36 CDT
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Hey,why did they leave poor Atem?! Yugi should go back to get his yami so they can go eat dinner at 5:00. It's the weekend!! I'm so glad!! Hope you update! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter took me a minute and a half to read lol, but it was kinda funny... i like the part where Yugi's like: "You said booby!". So kawaii and mature lmao. update!
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Reviewed By: tha Meowzy On: April 07, 2005 03:51 CDT
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lol, you are my number one fan Yamifanner. ^_^ actually, i just uploaded chapter two. they are pretty normal cabins. perhaps a bit of luxury. and bunkbeds. heheh.
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Title: Me Likey!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 17:21 CDT
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Hi!! It's me again. This story rocks!! So, my idea for the next chapter is that the inside of the cabins can look like a suite (the ones at the hotel)and it has all the fancy stuff. Everyone will be flattered especially Seto and Seth. Well,hope you update. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, not exactly gut-busting comedy, but i still like it :) update!
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