| "Teen titans:Tower of Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens. (Laughs evilly) Man this is good. Funny, and romantic. Usually you can't find stuff where its spliced together so well. Oh and thanks about spacing it out. Definitly made it easier to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and update when your able to. InuGhost
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 16:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice definitly liked this chapter. Nice and funny. Oh i have a little suggestion. Its a little hard to read when its all bunched together like that. Do you think you could space it out some? It'd just make it easier to read is all. But I'm definitly liking this. Can't wait to see just how much things heat up and what happens. Update soon, and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like it'll be good. can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: MysticDark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good my godbro! just make sure an english teacher doesnt read it.
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