Reviewed By: Porygon (the cyber one) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2001 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trés bien - very good. It's just ... *scratches her chin* not got the bad bits that a lot of similar fics do, you know? Can I point out, though, that your suspense is ruined unless you put in a nasty plot twist 'cause it's obvious that Carol is Mmmphh-mpph *frowns as her own conscious gags her* |
