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"Moth to a Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Reviewed By: black girl 06 (not logged in)  On: April 25, 2005 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it, it was very touching. Yes, I only read the intro. I saw you story posted in the Promotion threas so I decided to check it out. Your title sounds familiar though. I think it's from Daria. I'll read the rest soon. Later Days!
 Title: Drugs?
Reviewed By: MissKikyo  On: April 12, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think it's a good idea, to talk about it or have it in a fic. I mean alot of people do have drug addictions and I can link up to what Sango felt. Same problem. But anyways enough of my story, I love it ur so talented :P Lady Kikyo...
 Title: HMmm..
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_all_mine!  On: April 12, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've got some talent. I mean the way you write things, and describe things are great. Don't get mad about the rating I gave ya. I mean i started reading it u know? I like drug idea. I mean alot of people struggle with addictions, and Sango and her brother seem like too much of a goodie-good to do it. Nice fic! :)
 Title: Wow! ^_^;
Reviewed By: Caitlin  On: April 11, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't mind Inuyasha that much. I like it but not as much as .Hack and all them. Ficwise, I mean this really caught my eye. It knocked me off my feet when I read this! Kohaku.. sweet little brother Kohaku.. a drug addict? This I gotta see! Poor Sango-chan. Seems like she had a rough life back then didn't she? and ewww what guy was disgusting what he said about her. Blah. Anyways... Gotta fly! ^_^
 Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Inu's-Kagome-chan  On: April 11, 2005 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohh! This is really good! But Kohaku a drug addict? It adds a good twist, just I never really expected that. I can understand why Sango is so worried about Kohaku..I'm guessing later on it will be Miroku and Sango :) is he ever coming home!? See, I'm hooked! Anyways I'll be in touch ^_^
 Title: Wicked
Reviewed By: DazedAndConfused  On: April 11, 2005 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this was really good, besides some mistakes. But hey we all make them! It's really detailed, and besides you seem like your on a roll. Keep this fic alive ;)

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