| "Smoke" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Sahara Storm On: August 05, 2005 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job here. You don't really see many Asuma-centric fics around, and this is one of the best I've read. You really looked into his life, the reason behind his smoking, and the little thing we all know he's got going for Kurenai. Great work! :-) ~Sahara
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, interesting introspective. It's nice to see a little brief of thought on a character that is hardly ever mentioned. Very nice, my grandfather died of lung cancer, so I thought it was a good touch. Hope you continue this someday.
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