| "Working for The Customer" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well i just read this but it was a waste of my time since your planing on never updating its been like 3 years & I just found this amazing story only to realize after reading it all I will never ever find out what happens to Kagome & if Jaken ever gets to towel dry Sesshomaru!!!! How could you be so cruel to your loyal readers??? HOW??? So hopefully this review has given you a wonderful idea to write more for your oh so loyal readers awaiting you next update.
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Title: umm
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job NOT updating in like.. over two years. i was really hoping for an ending.. i was hoping to have my curiosity quenched. you dashed my hopes when you stopped posting. hope this sounds as dramatic as i hoped it would. hahah. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 22:46 CST
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Wat contract? u mean with who? n btw update soon... u should write longer chapters! if u can that is ^_^
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 01:39 CST
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What contact? I knew Sesshy was up to something ever seen he winked at Mygoua(don't know how to spell it SORRY) in his office. But will Kagome think Inuyasha knew about it and who is that other pair of eyes watchin Kagome.
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Title: :-)
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: I love Brian Barr for ever and always On: June 27, 2005 14:20 CDT
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You have a really good fic going so far. I hope you continue soon.
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Reviewed By: da1andonlydarkandlovely On: June 14, 2005 16:06 CDT
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i think the story itself is very good. but you REALY need to add a few things to it. LIke at least some good detials descriptions exppressions that sort of thing. like you had 2 big chances already and you blew it off and wrote crap. Like when the guy was came up to her grabbed her arm you could described howshe felt right then. for example The as she was about to go upstairs to her apartment she got that urky feeling like someone was watching again. and out of no where a creepy rough hand grapped her arm and threw her against her car. just when kagome was about to yell his hand covered her mouth. leened in to her ear and in an emotionless voice her atter said" try to scream and I'll leave you tramitied with the most painful experience you ever had." her heart began to beat faster. and just when he went to pull away his hand she leaped forward and tried to make a run for it. but he was to quick and pulled her against his muscular body breathing in her scent. her heart began to quicken each second and she thought it was about to poud put of her chest...... You see something like that. and when inuyasha asked kagome out you know you of at least wriiten somemore and when inu and that bitch kikio broke that would have been funny. and in case you havnt noticed i despise that wench kikio. Please don't take it the wrong way I don't mean to be picky i just thought that if i pointed out a few things you could become an even better writer and get more hits. imean it you the whole conse |
Reviewed By: ama_tori *formerly known as 1katie1* On: June 12, 2005 15:48 CDT
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teehee, i was just wondering what had happened to your story, and then i checked my e-mail, and wham, you updated ^^
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Reviewed By: MasterFluffyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 15:26 CDT
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That was a short, yet good, chapter! I want you to update again please! I know it took me a while to read this chapter, but the stupid Language Arts teacher I told you about in my first review gave me a report on President Richard Nixon (BORING!). Then to top it all off my retarded American History teacher gave me a report on Johnson's Island Prison giving me NO time to work on my valuable reading time! -pouts- Yeah well alls I wanted to tell you after all that pointless gabber about nothing that conscerns anyone but me, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE -inhale sharply- PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!! YOU HAVE A REALLY NICE STORY AND ME WANTS TO READ A LOT MORE OF IT! -behs a little more- I think that should be enough motovation... lol ~Cassie
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 05:52 CDT
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Come on!!! Where's the rest?! Har-de-har-har! i haven't heard that in a while, and i like it when i do!! *cheesy grin* :D KEEP GOING, GIRL!!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: May 01, 2005 19:54 CDT
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Too damn short! Very good though. Story is getting interesting it'll be fun to see how this plays out. Be waiting for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: 1katie1(to lazy 2 sign on) On: May 01, 2005 19:00 CDT
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plz update soon!! i got a little confused, so one guy was trying to like, kidnap her, and inuyasha saved her, or did inuyasha try to kidnap her? gah!! i guess i'll find out in the next chapter
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Reviewed By: MasterFluffyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:54 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE! FLUFFY WANTS TO READ MORE AND MORE! GRRR! lol Update soon or I will... I will... I don't know what I will do... PLEASE UPDATE! I likes to read this story! By the way, I'm not totally illiterate... I just like to talk funny and it makes my Language Arts teacher so mad! That is totally off subject... I will now continue with my stupid little beg PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to read! -begs you a little more- This is getting embarassing! Just update. -reads reveiw over- I think I got my point through to you... if I didn't, I can always come back and annoy you to death again. ~Cassie P.S. MUAHAHAHAH -cough cough- HAHAHAHA!
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Reviewed By: MasterFluffyGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 20:07 CDT
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Please, please, please update soon. I hate cliffhangers and then someone desides to just give up on their fics, even when they are awesome like this one! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~Cassie
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 10:51 CDT
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nice story... I've never heard of a plot like this, it's original and I like it ^^ Please, just try to write longer chapters... Well, keep writing the good stuff please ^_~
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Reviewed By: ~*~1katie1~*~ On: April 17, 2005 22:22 CDT
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if you don't continue the story i swear i'll track you down and... well, you'll see *smirks evilly*
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Reviewed By: 1katie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 11:44 CDT
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ok this is 1katie1... lol good job! it's kinda weird you're reading my story and i'm reading yours XD good job, update soon!
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Reviewed By: 1katie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 15:26 CDT
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good job, just 1 thing you might want to know, it's spelt Sango... lol... i've been really annoying today, and picky... don't worry, i have 2 bruises, a scrach and a sore cheek from it :P
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