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| "Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 1: Oooohhh... that was so, so, so sad. And yet, so true. It could really happen...
| Title: "Seasons"
Reviewed By: some girl On: May 19, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good!! I loved the great emotional depth within it! very short but it still gets the job done...good job!
| Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I love one shots. They are like snap shots of emotions and yours did not fail to deliver. The only thing I would consider changing is the antiquated notion of the season metaphor. The season metaphor is tried and true, but you don't offer your own perspective on them. From what I read, you have the capability to come up with a more original aspect of the seasonal metaphor. I would recommend looking at it through an anylitical perspective. That is, of course, unless you follow the school of TS Eliot. Either way, your writing is very good. You should be proud of yourself. Most other people don't even try to include metaphor in their prolific writings. I'm happy to find that i am not the only one. If you have a moment, I would greatly appretiate your thoughts on my writings; a review from you would most certainly be helpful in developing my own skill as a writer.
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