Title: IS there anothor chapter?
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style. I love it so much that I would really like it if you wrote another chapter to Chocolate. WHat would happen if Aya followed Yohji? Was this whole thing really to teach Aya a lesson or is it Yohji's confession for his love for Aya? Oh please write another chapter please. I absolutely lved this fanfic.
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