| "Valentine's Day!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: oops sorry
Reviewed By: sharingan216 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ey im sharingan216 im sorry about the review i wrote it was for the wrong valentine story. gomen nasai! but eitherway i liked it very good except narutos house itsn't TAT bad of a condition
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Title: werid but good
Reviewed By: sharingan216 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked up fanfic up to the part were like it turned all gay. its good still so all i can say is... keep up the good work:-D
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Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is pretty cute, but the chapters are ubershort and you putting in self comments just disrupts the flow of the story. And the scene about Sakura using the honorific "-kun" confused me- I think you should read into your facts more before centering a scene on them. Also, Konoha has a theatre. It's in the first Naruto movie. Have a day. n_n
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Reviewed By: Naruto926 On: April 25, 2005 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilariuos story! NO SASU/HINA! Kiba/Hina
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Reviewed By: Freako_freak On: April 23, 2005 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I'm not a Sakura fan, I really loved that! Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: Night!
Reviewed By: Jayjem On: April 21, 2005 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awright!! Another great Naruto fic!!! Keeps up the good work I say!! I'll be keeping my eyes to my computer to read your Naruto fics so I say... CONTINUE ON YOUR FICS!!!
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