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"Awakened Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: sirencirce(too lazy to login)  On: September 01, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story, but could you possibly separate into paragraphs. It wouldn't be as confusing.
 Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2005 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hurray, the past has been corrected! As uploaded, the last two chapters have no separation into paragraphs which would make them easier to read, but a hopeful and enchanting story in any case.

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