Title: nice
Reviewed By: jomomma082 On: June 29, 2005 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good for your first fanfic, but you can do better. Keep trying and good luck with the DBGT/Kirby one. Try to use more of your own original ideas and be less predictable.
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