| "A Family For Kawai" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Monkey gurl On: June 17, 2005 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like n thanks for taking my adive the font is alot better.update soon as you i really like this story.
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Reviewed By: Monkey Gurl On: May 30, 2005 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay its a very good story so far and you have a very good plot but the only is the font color in the second chapter the color was hurting my eyes so if you could not do the font color or chose a darker color that would be great. other wise itz a very good story i would like you to update. plus you don't see very many goku/oc very often not that i have anything aganist yaio i like but i sometimes can't see goku w/ a guy. anyways upate soon as you can.
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