| "Abandoned" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Well
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good, but try and space out it a little bit. if you dont know what i mean, email me. kkz? bye! ~Dark
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Title: Goop job!
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_O... I'm speachless...(Bad spelling I know...) -_-U The story is doing great so far!!! but donn't you think that there are to many colors? but it does make it cooler then some of the same stuff that I've seen so far. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! *^_^* JA-NE!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 10:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoooo, Alux is sooo evil! I have the slightest suspicion of who the boy might be...but I\'ll have to find out for sure ^__~ ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
o, I am curious now. who is the boy???? ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm happy with the new chapter, but what was up with the police officer? seriously!! ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
thank god Bri is still alive *sighs* I thought you really killed her!! I am happy Ara finally made it into the story ^___^ ~Phoenix
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sobs* why did you kill her??? WHYYYYYYYYYYYY?? also, is Ara still going to be in the story? ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gah!!! save Bri, Save Bri!!!!!!!!!!! ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
woot, another chapter so soon!! now, Alux is a botch, kill her!! ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, you updated!! it seems that you have entered yet another character...go Bri!! *laughs* anyway, please update again soon. ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, I like this one!! well written, and I love vampires. update soon!! ~Tsuki
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