| "Sky Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Amamizu On: July 02, 2006 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story so far please hurry up and up date
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Title: Ultimatereview
Reviewed By: Google's dad : ) On: June 13, 2005 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because I'm your dad I must first mention your grammer. : ) I'm sure that will improve as you continue to explore your talents in writing (and spell check): ). The first chapter I thought was outstanding. For it to be soo short (not too short though) it was very entertaining. I liked the way the two characters are establishing a relationship with some affection. It was sooo cute. : ) YOU GO GIRL!
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Reviewed By: shadowluver5 On: June 11, 2005 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I luv ur story please keep updating (puppy dog face) and also could you bring a Shaman King guest thanx and keep up the good work. P.S. school sux(>_
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Reviewed By: Lena321 On: May 30, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really REALLY ike your story. Dont stop it now.kay
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Title: whats up
Reviewed By: lena321 On: May 14, 2005 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY,REALLY I WAS JUST WONDERING WHEN ARE YOU GONNA KEEP ON WRITING. YOUR STORY IS REALLY COOL.
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