| "Sabure no Kaze" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 11, 2005 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am a big fan of hetero hentais with real love in them, not just one-night stands, like I have read before. I am very impress, and I think you have talent. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Unforgiven On: May 11, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I enjoyed it. It was well written and detailed. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: xkimex On: May 11, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was slightly disappointed because i thought it would be all out porno. Nah, not really. It turned out to be a sweet story about desire, which is more quality than cheesiness. I liked how desire and conflict was aranged in her head, but I wistfully wish that I could see the inner conflict of the priest. And yes, I understand that it was from her POV. And I really liked how she didn't wuss out and reject him because she was torn between what to do.
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Reviewed By: Jilly Hit On: May 03, 2005 03:09 CDT
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The world of fan fiction has at last gained you as an author! What else can I say but, Mazel Tov! So often, in so many venues, we fans are subject to words compiled by the adoring fans of our most beloved interests. And while it is a comfort to know that we are not the only beings hunched over a keyboard, thrashing out stories we would like to see... Some are not always up to the task. Contained within this yarn, one can find a great command of the language and the grasp of a struggling priest. Well done! Write more!
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