| "Yin and Yang" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: shroom87 On: June 28, 2005 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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heheh that was hot!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review. This is pretty good for a first time lemon! Believe me, I've written a few!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! They made up! Now bring on the the make up lemon!
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Title: ying and yang
Reviewed By: anissa32 On: June 09, 2005 00:59 CDT
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Well, those two are certaily volatile! Also I can see in a way how Angelo ticks Duo off because he comes across as kind of arrogant so I can see how that would piss Duo off. Because overall Duo is just thinking about keeping Heero safe. Well, now that it appears that Heero has gotten a better control over his powers let see what you have planned next. Looking forward to reading the next update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 06:27 CDT
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Duo is really pissed. I think you should make Heero make it up to him. UPdate soon
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 06:31 CDT
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I'm a little late on the review thing. I really like Heero's other self. And I'm glad they settled their differences so they would kill ech other. I have a feeling things are about to get real interesting. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Red Tail On: May 29, 2005 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Oh my god, it's so wonderfully written and when I checked back and saw an update I as sooo happy! ^^ ::Bows:: You are a wonderful writter indeed. I give you a ten/ten for everything! Please update soon! ~Red Tail (Lost-Remembrance)
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (nis) On: May 18, 2005 16:58 CDT
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*cocks gun* The sleep deprevition I can understand, writer's block?...hell yeah! But the little bit about Lucious going down to easy and Heero being in his demon form and just leaving it like that? Omae o Korosu!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 07:10 CDT
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0_o what did he do with Duo? Dammit! Why'd you stop. Waaahhhhhh! I hate cliff hangers! Why do people have to be so mean.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 06:42 CDT
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*snicker* Dog language rocks! Oh, anywho, yeah you should add a lemon! Heero's teasing Duo way too much. But only after they kick Lucius's ass. What a gay name. Lucius. XP. Of course its your story.
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Reviewed By: narutofan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 03:16 CDT
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cool!!!!!! can't waite to read more......Do you think we will get a chance to see Heero's demon side? "Come to the darkside Heero." (lol)Well I guess even if it does happen good old Duo will show him the way into the light. Keep up the work love reading this. :)
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 06:48 CDT
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Oh You....Omae o Korosu! How dare you leave it like that! What's wrong with people today! They write a story then leave it at the good part. You're so mean! WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 08:30 CDT
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Oh and Relena is a super phycho bitch! Go Sally!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 08:30 CDT
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It's about to be a bar fight! Yay. Why did you stop there!? Keep going! Who's going to kick who arse? Duo or Heero or maybe both. Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you stop?! Keep going! This is waay good and Heero is finally back. Does the other pilots gets to see his special ability? Has Heero changed alot? Ambrosia is sooooo kawaii. Update soon!!!!!!!
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