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| "In Our Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 11:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, that was so sad, Sango is gone! This is a great story so far, keep up the good work.
| Title: oh great.... you had to kill sango!
Reviewed By: Hingetsa-sama On: May 11, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... len i hate you... you made hingetsa, zada, kuroii, filla, lyndora, and chloe bawl their bloody eyes out... ick what a mess. anyway another job well done, plot is fantasic. but the whole inu saying "I know whre you live" was creepy! yes i also know where you live, and maybe i feel like stealing all your inu eps!(jk) MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA H! THAT IS SOOO FUN! sorry wanted to see how much you can type before it cuts you off. lol. HEllAWOOOOOOOOOT! JAJAJAJAJAJAJA LALALLAALALLALALALALALALALALALALALALALALLAALALLALALALALALALALAALA HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ............ that's alot of space.........................jajajajajjaajaja hahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaha.... i have no life, lol, /......................@%$#^$&%#%#%#%%$^%$&^$^&$$$$$$$$$$$$#^#^ #&^&$&& all most th | Reviewed By: nauriell (i'm a lazy bum ^-^) On: May 06, 2005 19:23 CDT
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SHE WAS IN WITNESS PROTECTION PROGRAM AND HAD TO FAKE HER OWN DEATH CAUSE THEY FOUND HER!!!!!!...I like Sango, and it's sad that she died T.T. but pertaining more to the chapter...AAAWWWWWWWW!
| Title: This is The Author!!!
Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the review!!!! Yeah, Sango died...but thats a really good idea! In fact...*rips a few pages out*...i might just use it!!! Thank you so so so so much!!! Good luck with the homework!!
| Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (not logged in) On: May 06, 2005 15:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww Sango died!!!! Im so sad *cries hysartically* you have writers block huh? aw that sucks.....so you want some ideas? I have an interesting twist. in a few chapters you can make her come back to life! It could be another girl who got killed! Like kikyo! I dont really hate kikyo all that much but i find she takes on these kinds of rolls a lot. But you wouldnt want that because you have an idea of who killed her right......well i cant really think right now because my homework is killing me mercilessly. if i think of an idea ill send something. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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