| "Elementals" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: kyoko_uzamaki On: July 11, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has to be the best yusuke and kagome pairing that ive ever read
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 16:05 CST
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Great story!!! You really need to update sooner, though. I really like it. ~DA
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: September 30, 2005 19:17 CDT
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Wow, great fic your writing here. Though I must admit, I was confused a bit in the first couple of chapters and had to reread a few paragrahs to figure out which characters you were talking about. But it eventually cleared up. I really like how your portraying Shippo, he seems so in character. Awesome job.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 15:48 CDT
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Of course I'm still reading.^^ I love this story! Shippo is kind of acting like Youko in this one story I read. O.o It's weird he's all perverted and stuff. But's it's a refreshing change from the innocent Shippo that gets on my nerves sometimes. I'll keep reading as long as you supply the chapters. No matter how long it takes.^^
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 15:25 CDT
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This is awesome! I really like Taji he's my fave. Besides the original of course.^^ I like the way Souta acts too it's funny.
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Reviewed By: moon flower On: July 15, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it a lot very well written. keep it a kag/yus their are far to little of those and update plz!
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is really good. I liked this story a lot, even more than your 'Time Traveler Meets Spirit Detective' one. It's much better. The writing style is more mature, more professional. I like the characterizations a great deal, and I can't wait to read more of this. It totally rocks. ... Okay, question time. What is it that's above the city? Will Kagome be hosting a small time refugee camp on the shrine grounds? How will the new people interact with her family? How will Kagome be involved in the main conflict? What will she become to those whom she saved and decided to stay with her? Will she be holding classes with/for them? Will she train them (and how, if so)? What happened that Keiko is now Kurama's love interest? How will Kagome and Yusuke get to interact in the future? How will Kagome and Yusuke interact? Is Yusuke aware of his aura and all of the subtleties involved in any way at all? What is Shippou's "weird sense of humor"? What happened to Souta? Will Yusuke get an explanation about Mikos? What happened with Naraku and the IY gang in the Sengoku Jidai? Is Grampa Higurashi okay? What about Mrs. Higurashi? What in the world is over the city, anyway? Why did Kagome feel she had to get the jewel to the center of the city? Kagome mentioned the jewel, and the detectives did not become curious about what she was referring to. Why does Kagome's aura react to Yusuke's that way? What was it trying to do? Is it because they are soul mates or something else? Luck, Kin
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 15:08 CDT
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It very interesting....PLEASE MAKE IT A KAGOME/KURAMA PAIRING FUCK THAT KEIKO CHICK WHAT HAPPENDING WITHTHE REST OF THE INU GANG WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE SO MY DAMNED QUESTIONS CAN BE ANSWERED I'M GOING CRAZY HERE UPDATE SOON. P.S. KAGOME/KURAMA LOVER 4EVA 4LIFE East Sider Rider or Die Boo. Holla at ure gurl
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 12:59 CDT
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This story is cool. Update it soon please.
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 15:11 CDT
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Sss-! A very welcome surprise to stumble upon this morning. Definitively of high-quality, and indicative of serious plot. I'm impressed, very much so. Even if the pairing is not quite one I usually prefer, this looks like it will be so good that things like that are inconsequential. Once again, you write something that leaves me eager for more. I look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please upsate asap!!!
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