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| "Father and Son" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! That was so cute!! That's just like something people I know would do... Hell... I would do that!
| Title: big old convoy!
Reviewed By: Joey Swing Breaker On: June 02, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was lonely on the road one night and I had to stop at a truck stop to sleep. My convoy was upset with me because I fell behind. The truck stop was equipped with restrooms and internet in Tuscon, AZ. So, I was feeling horny, so I grabbed a diet coke and got online. The father/son relationship was HOT. .. like I mean Paris Hilton hot. Anyway, the story was written very well. And you can tell that the person who wrote it was aroused at the time of inception. I appreciated the use of grammar and punctuation, having a degree in English myself. All in all, the story was really fun to read. Yu-Ghi-Oh rocks my socks off.
| Reviewed By: Booze Hound On: May 12, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read a lot of fanfics in the day. But this one was a real turn on. Even though it is dealing with parenting it makes me think of the incestial days ive had with my son Jim-Bob. Also, id like to say that i am really disappointed that bikky didnt have porno under his mattress. Why, when i was only 7 years old i had this magazine with hairy, naked, she-men. Overall, the story kicked ass.
| Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! You've done a great job with this fic! I love it!! I don't normally read anything under adn R rating but this sounded so intriguing I couldn't pass it up. I'll bet Bikky is...well I won't say here incase I'm right. You've done a really good job at keeping everyone in character especially Dee! lol! Ignore the enjoyment factor rating because, like I said before, I don't really like to read lower rated stories since I'm a hardcore Yaoi fanatic so it's nothing personal really. I'm very glad I decided to read this story!! It was really good! Please update soon!
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