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Reviewed By: Anja [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the way that you wrote this and found it great to read. I felt his emotions, felt his pain. Usinig the repetition of "Who...are you" was a very powerfull tool to use. I somewhat agree with moonhanyou, that the ending was not what I was expecting, but I don't think it was bad. I actually liked how you highlighted the relationship between Syaoran and Fai and Karugane, it's not something that's focused on a lot. Really nice overall though I thought.
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 01:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow. This was very well written. Kudos to you! Please write another! I absolutely adore Tsubasa Chronicle. Though there really isn't much fanficiton out for it just yet.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* so sad...makes me whant to read more Tsubasa manga. Its sooooo depressing *sobs* -Tsuki
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou (not signed in, nyah!) On: May 13, 2005 08:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
very nice, very sad, very angsty, very good. you did a wonderful job exploring the desperate need syaoran feels at losing sakura-chan's memories, and you do a wonderful job of making them fall into place. i only wish you had done more for the ending. it was a little bit of a let down. i don't know. i just expected there to be more. maybe you've done that on purpose... but whatever it is, i hope you can find a way to make it a more fitting end for a wonderful story.
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