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"Slayers Labyrinth" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: angelicyokai  On: July 18, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry, I did NOT mean the ratings as they were listed, I thought they were out of five, and didn't bother to scroll the numbers. I REALLY liked this fic.
 Reviewed By: angelicyokai  On: July 18, 2005 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a really good fic. The only problem I had was you changed every line from labrynth just enought so that it wasn't word for word. I think it would have worked better to either not put lines from the movie in at all, or take them exactly as they were said. Other than that, I loved the fic. Especially the terrifying copy nagas. I also like the way you changed the ending. And of course, Zel was so kawaii. Thanks for writing a really fun fic.

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