| Reviewed By: RTBS On: July 14, 2005 02:41 CDT|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Definitely an... unorthodox fic, but I salute you; few would have the guts to write such a thing. The writing was good overall, but I noticed one slight error: In Serge's homeworld, Glenn got vaporized along with the Dead Sea and all the other Dragoons. Don't worry about it though.