| Reviewed By: I On: June 11, 2005 22:48 CDT|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Wen i read fanfics, i could really care less about the grammar. But i did love the style of riting, which made it all the more enjoyable. I myself have gone over multiple scenrios of what Koryu could be thinking or feeling after Kohaku's 100-year punishment, and i felt the same way this author did: that Koryu totally misses Kohaku and that he loves her! Aww, how adorable! So i really enjoyed reading this, finding it to match my way of thinking. It was good, i hope there's more! .... But, the one thing i couldn't stand-- no offense-- is that the author referred to Kohaku as "him" rather than "her". I like yaoi just as much as the next manga-fan, but in this particular manga, i like Kohaku being a girl. Sry! But regardless, it was still AWESOME!