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| "A New Friend: Pilot of the Blackrose" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: New pilot: Pilot of the black rose
Reviewed By: aiki On: June 24, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like ur story! If u want an i dea then i think u should make the chaps longer and a kira+taylor pairing. Pleaz update soon. Later
| Reviewed By: Me On: June 05, 2006 09:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
READ THIS WHOLE POST. IT'S SO DANG TRUE* 1. At least 2 people in this world love you so much they would die for you. 2. At least 15 people in this world love you in some way. 3. The only reason anyone would ever hate you is because they want to be just like you. 4. A smile from you can bring happiness to anyone, even if they don't like you. 5. Every night, SOMEONE thinks about you before they go to sleep. 6. You mean the world to someone. 7. If not for you, someone may not be living. 8. You are special and unique. 9. Someone that you don't even know exists loves you. 10. When you make the biggest mistake ever, something good comes from it. 11. When you think the world has turned its back on you, take a look: you most likely turned your back on the world. 12. When you think you have no chance of getting what you want, you probably won't get it, but if you believe in yourself, probably, sooner or later, you will get it. 13. Always remember the compliments you received. Forget about the rude remarks. 14. Always tell someone how you feel about them; you will feel much better when they know. 15. If you have a great friend, take the time to let them know that they are great. Add this as a comment to ten of your friends tonight and at midnight your true love will find you. Something good will happen to you at 2:25 tomorrow. Get ready for the biggest shock of your life. Whoever breaks this chain letter will be cursed with 10 relationship problems for the next ten years tag ur it!! this is so scary!!! send this to 15 ppl in the next 143 min. and then press F6 and your crushes name will appear in big letters!! it is so scary because it works.... but if you break the chain.. you will be cursed w/ relationship problemss
| Reviewed By: Bennett On: May 25, 2005 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your story to where you finished and I LOVE it! I find it hard to believe that you've only had 1 review! I also find it hard to believe that you don't know what to do next! So here's my idea. How about the girl Kira has rescued is a co-ordinator criminal! You know, she has access to information that could destroy the co-ordinator's AND humans! That's why she was beaten up when she was rescued, ZAFT need that information NO MATTER WHAT! How's THAT for an idea! I hope it helps! Update soon! I'll keep my eyes open! Later!
| Title: GREAT STORY!!
Reviewed By: ZGMF-X10Alexs On: May 22, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay for Ideas I suggest that: 1.Kira tells her that he's a coordinator 2.She gets a gundam 3.some k/t action 4.She gets pissed at Kira for some reason 5.gets captures by ZAFT 6.little a/t action to it in any order I don't care. I really
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