| "Unbinding the Contract" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: crescent-moon-demon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! SasuNaru is just so HOT!! i love this (like really much so!) n i'm guessing ur teacher's gonna be jiraiya!! (at least it would be really funny if it was him- hehe ^ ^) Update soon, ne?
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Reviewed By: kyogre_latias [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 20:35 CDT
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Oh yeah, shouldn't this be under "Hentai" too?
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Reviewed By: kyogre_latias [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF??!! That was funny (just kinda wrong)!!!
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Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 01:58 CST
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holy crap, tht was so funny! ur gonna write more rite? & soon right!? i hopes
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont worry guys. the story continues on fanfiction.net. use the url: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2057774/5/ this is a great story, i love the tension between naruto and sasuke! i also like that you managed to get them into this situation without a bunch of OOC stuff happening. :)
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: August 05, 2005 22:22 CDT
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This is so interesting! You have to update and tell us who the person is! It could be almost anyone! Like Jiraiya! Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: sasunaru4eva On: July 31, 2005 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story just rocks dude. Continue!!!! Who's the unknown person??? Gaara???
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Reviewed By: Ky0kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 16:42 CDT
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AGH! WHO IS IT? Update soon! I gotta know >___< And when are they finally gonna get a real kiss in there?! -pulls out hair-
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Reviewed By: Ky0kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahaha. I spit my juice down the front of my shirt when I read that.......x__x It was cold..And I'm wearing a tanktop :(
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Reviewed By: random reader On: June 20, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmmm *no idea as to who it could be* no one comes to mind. oh well. great story update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Twilight_Aura On: June 18, 2005 13:30 CDT
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hmm...maybe jaraiya?...hmmmm...ummmm...ugh idk!>..
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Reviewed By: flooby_1256 On: May 24, 2005 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I thought this fanfic was nicely funny, and it was a good way to lighten the mood during the intimate bits too.
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 14:54 CDT
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^^ This is good, but you seem to be having some trouble with verb-tense agreement. I mean, there was this one line, that was roughly 'Sakura sat under the tree *or whatever* and wondered where *insert the names of the characters here* are at.' That's two different verb-tenses, past and present. So, pick one, okay? That'll make it better. Anyway, yeah, this is cool...And I don't even know what Naruto IS...^^ Update soon.
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