| "Paper Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Saldeas On: May 24, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see more. You could clean up the switching between present and past tenses but other than that very......interesting.
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Reviewed By: LP On: May 22, 2005 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
is the CD on shinjis bed waht i thnk it is?
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Reviewed By: loslomo On: May 20, 2005 01:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
good start, write more
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Reviewed By: japanery On: May 19, 2005 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the hell is the sex?
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