| "Memories in another life2" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Nils-Peter On: January 05, 2003 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I live in Sweden and I most say that your story Memories in another life2 are wery good.
And I wise that you continue it and more people will read yor story and write to you.
I write storys myself and your story of Ash as a legendary pokémon gave me an idea to a new story.
If you continue many people will thank you for your storys.
They give others fantasy and then they can wrote ther own story´s.
Then you will have more people that write to you.
I wish you a happy new year and I hope you continue your story IT IS WERY GOOD!
Goodbye and have a happy new year from Nils-Peter from Sweden. |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I have a suggestion that Ashley and Panthor should go back to Pallet and Panthor switches back to Ash. |
Reviewed By: Cyber Fox On: November 18, 2002 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Please keep on writing. Maybe Ashley should catch one more pokémon, before going home. Don't stop now. |
Reviewed By: ages On: October 18, 2002 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think they meet misty and the rest of ash's friend after ashley catches 2 more pokemon. and after panthor sees shis old friends something happens |
Reviewed By: Ayla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh, I like this one! ^^ You're gonna continue this, right? .....RIGHT? |
Reviewed By: becca On: July 12, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! really good fic! i was just wondering why
don't Panthor ( did i get that right) and Ashley
go find Gary + Misty? just please write more. |
Reviewed By: Ryu the Weredragon On: February 11, 2002 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like it alot, that's pretty much the only reason I want more of it....Besides, this storyline path has never been tried...Oh SURE We've read about Ash Being a Pokemon Before (Heck, I have a few chapters on my computer [that as of Febuary 11, 2002]) have not been added to the site yet, but that's because I'm afraid the stories will get cut off like my other Pokemon Fiction (PokeBall Z)...Anyway, Go FOR IT!
I want to see Misty's reacton to seeing Ash's new Pokemon form! |
Reviewed By: ssj6rich [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2001 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I want ashley and panthor to go back to pallet town and see panthor will do when he sees the old gang. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2001 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
is this going to be an ash misty thing or not? coz if its not then im not going to read it, but it is good, i like how ash is a pokemon good stuff!!! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
i want ashley and panthor to continue back to pallet and see panthor's reaction when he sees misty and gary and all fo ash's old friends. but i also want to see ashley tell about her family with panthor when they are trying to catch more pokemon. Keep on writing, it is getting interesting! |
Reviewed By: biocat On: December 04, 2001 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
It's very intersting. Read it. Please continue the story. |
