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| "My Hiei" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm not that interested in poem's but I'll still write a review for a few lines. Keep up the good work! I loved the line "his evil eye shines viotet in my mind" Cause you know his Jagon is violet, well, of course you know. You are mostlikely a deticated Hiei fan as I am. I know alot about him, as you do. So I wanted to review just for the heck of it, and I know how it feels never getting any reviews exept like, three, so here goes, I liked the poem I mean, it's confusing because they give it so many names ya know? Jagon eye, evil eye, I mean come on! Well, I guess it's not entiraly 'Funimations' fault but, I still hate how they change the scrip so much from the origanal manga. They kinda changed Hiei's character. Kinda but not really. They made him alot meaner. Not that he is mean, cause he is like, the coolest one. I'm sort of an expert on Hiei, although I havent written a story on him yet. Anyway, great story. And sorry if this is a confusing review.
| Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm not exactly a poem kinda person but I'll give you my opion on it none the less. I didn't really like the first stanza (I don't know what they are really called, but lets just go with that for now) because it seemed like you were trying to hard to be deep and it really showed. And it didn't really make all that much sense. The second stanza on the other hand was pretty good. I like that line 'His evil eye shines deep violet in my mind.' That was cool except for the fact that his eyes are red. Now the very last stanza really didn't go with the rest of the poem for some reason. The poem talked about and described Hiei but then in the last verse(stanza) it said Hiei is mine and mine alone. I didn't like that part. Okay the very last thing that I have to say is your summary said that the poem was about how Hiei affected your life, and I know that poems can mean different things to people, but I didn't think that the poem described how he affected your life, it seemed more like you were just describing him. But I guess overall your poem was okay. But like I said I'm not really into poems so I don't know much about them, but that's just how I see it. I hope this review helped you.
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