Reviewed By: Demosthenes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2001 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No way! That's it?! There needs to be more! Truthfully, you depicted Umi so perfectly! I've seen so many authors bash Umi, it disgusts me. The way you pulled out her feelings was great! And the terse statements every now and then..... such as Cephiro. Zagato and Emeraude. (I hope you know what I mean) They added some nice flavor to the fic. In some cases, if abused, they can make a fic choppy, but in yours it helped the fic flow. I loved it and I hope to read more of your work in the future. |
