Title: HEHEHE
Reviewed By: Tear Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*You are walking along a distant ridge and you see a darkend figure* "HELLO!"!*Figure does not respond* "HELLOOOOO!!!!"*Figure stops, waves and then you see a bright flash of light, suddenly there is a bridge spanning the ridges made of ice. The figure makes her way to you* "Hi!I'm Kiri the Tear Alchemist....who are you?" Liked your ficcy!!*Chuckle, snort, snicker, laugh*
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