| Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:20 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Well done. This is an original take, and though I am a little sad at the fact the Sailor Senshi couldn't heal her (which will probably be a point of contention for other readers that you may want to explain later on). Keep writing this story. I want to see what happens next.