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"Battle Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2006 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
I love the story line, but your grammer and sentence structure could use a little work. Most importantly, don't stop! You should finish a whole story to see how you progress and how you can improve.
 Reviewed By: shoureijuu  On: October 24, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please get a Beta reader. It's a very sudden story, the idea is interesting, but at the same time it really lacks foundation. Keep working on your writing. :)

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