| "Warriors of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Zan-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 01:48 CST
Comment/Review:
well...when is the real story out? or do i have to wait...damn i hate waitin
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Reviewed By: Digimon Lover On: May 25, 2005 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, if you ask me, Persephone's name is pronounced Meh-rI Soo. And then there's SupremeWarriormon. Was KickAssmon too obvious? I also found your mixture of dub and original names/terms confusing. Aside from all that, I must give you points for some great humor, especialy Ruki's "problems with being a girl" speech. Your story sounds like an interesting premise, but the bad guy (or girl in this case) is a bit too cliche.
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Reviewed By: Asmodeus_Knight616 On: May 24, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful sTory!
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