| "Bloody Valentine" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Peril879(not on) On: August 11, 2005 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
... I dunno what to see. It was well written but Shigure would not have acted so cheery. Plus I liek Yuki/Tohru... All of your muses... are Pita-Ten characters... wow...
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Title: yay death to yuki
Reviewed By: tell2cell1blah On: June 26, 2005 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes yuki died! and by kyo, hooray! I really loved it. I also like Good Charlotte and the mix was great. but I dont think they would let you out of jail if you killed some one...still write more in this style it was cool and different. keep up the good work
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Title: valentine
Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad i'm not the only one who likes Good Charlotte. *smile* i really liked this one. i also think the idea would work with Akito taking the place of Tohru, Kureno for Yuki, and Shigure for Kyo. great idea, though, keep writing. you have a wonderful sense of creativity.
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Title: I think I love you.
Reviewed By: BizarreLoveTriangle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was very well written, a few extraneous parts, in my opinion, but I guess not everyone has seen the inside of a jail... Anyways, I really liked the idea of Kyo killing Yuki, I really hate him. I'll have to borrow it.
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Reviewed By: randomperson On: May 26, 2005 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
-_- this is one of the worst fics i have ever read. do you honestly think tohru would forgive kyo if he killed someone? noooo.... she is a NICE PERSON. and people don't get out of jail if they've killed someone. there is no bail, they are kept in custody. get your facts straight.
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