| "The 3 Elements" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story very much and I had fun reading it. I like how it ended too. Keep working on writing I think you are do a great job for English not being your native tounge. You might want to find a beta reader who could help you with that sort of thing.
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Reviewed By: Angel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I loved your story when are you going to update? I would love to read more. |
Reviewed By: NightAngel On: October 14, 2002 03:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yei! It's me the authour! Sorry for this, but I won't be able to update here on mediaminer, so please go to www.fanfiction.net! Thank you! |
Reviewed By: Jennie On: September 05, 2002 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, I'm reviewing here instead of fanfiction.net. Nice chapter but short. Glad you finally continued it. Anyway, please get the next chapter up soon. And from what I saw, your grammar and vocabulary aren't that bad. If yyou really want to be sure, I suggest getting a beta-reader, someone who reads through the chapter before you post it, to make sure the grammar and everything is correct, and that the part makes sense.
Anyway, nice job. |
Reviewed By: "Skippy" On: May 29, 2002 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
When are you going to complete this? I really want to read how it ends. |
Reviewed By: han On: April 20, 2002 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i want more. this is really good. |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2002 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am the first ta review 2 dis thing an i luv the plot but it ain't finished yet **starts crying uncontrollably** **waaa WAAA** o well this is an awesome fic jus like the others he/she has rote |
