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"All Stories Have a Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Lisha Lane  On: June 15, 2005 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was kind of confusing. Who are Hideki Ando, Mamoru,and Kaiya? I gathered that Mamoru was Tohru's child and Kaiya was Hana's child, but you still didn't explain what happened to the Sohma's, how she met her husband, what he died of, how Hana got married and how old the children are. Still, it was very good.
 Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: BizarreLoveTriangle [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 28, 2005 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not very fond of OCs, but beyond that, you write very well and I am enjoying the story.

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