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| "FAKE in Love: Act VII, Relations and Celebrations" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2013 10:54 EDT
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Okay this was a really cute one :3 But with enough action too. On the streets as well as between the sheets, hehe! :D I'm feeling so sorry for Rose. He seems so lonely. I wish you would finally put him together with Diana, and JJ with Drake. I mean, what else should become of them? I request a happy end for everyone here! ;) (Oh please don't tell me that Rose and JJ will end up together, that would be... weird ^^) Anyway, aweseome as usual, and now I'll check out the next Act! See ya! :) | Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one was so yummy I'm going to the next right now!!!
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 02:27 EDT
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Best yet,at least, until I get to the next ones.
| Title: YOU'RE KILLING US!
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 09:44 EDT
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OK, I'm just going to post here and say this - Everyday, I come to check for a new fic of yours. And every day so far - NUTTIN! AAAAAAAARGH!! You're killing us!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. Must....have....new...Grumpy...Demon...fic...can't...go...on...without....i t....PLEASE! Update soon! OK, was that a bit obvious and over the top? My apologies. But you're writing is so wonderful and brilliant I begin to suffer when I have to go too long without more. I'm just trying to gentle, if annoyingly, encourage you. Your friend in Blue.
| Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:30 EDT
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Everytime I get an email giving notice that you've posted a new fic, it totally makes my day! I can't wait to be able to rush home and read it all at once. Your work is amazing, and is so in-character that it truly feels like an extension of the manga. I've read your stories over and over, and never get tired of them! I hope you continue to write and share your love of Dee and Ryo!
| Title: Moments
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a reader & a HUGE fan of FAKE, it seems I've struck gold. This last story of yours was pure bliss. Perhaps it's a fault of mine, but I've come to take your talent, creativity, writing style, perception & delicate yet honest touch for granted. When I see a new Act posted, I expect nothing but brilliance. I've never been disappointed. If there was a word I could use to describe this Act, it would be WARM. It was wonderfully warm. It captured the essence of the Christmas season, & had so many blissful little moments. Dee remembering his Christmases at the orphanage. Ryo remembering the beginnings of their relationship. Even how it opens, with Dee & Ryo in bed together. These are all of the tender little moments that make up a relationship. You develop and fill them in so brilliantly. I felt like I got to spend a couple of very intimate days with some wonderfully close friends. Thank you for filling in all of the details that Sanami left out, in a way I'm sure Sanami would be proud of. Technically speaking, this story was one of your best. Your grammar & wording style has improved tremendously over the course of your acts, not that it was ever bad. One of your greatest strengths has always been your grasp of the english language & how to use it in its most powerful ways. But in this last act, you've managed to improve & develop an even stronger writing style. And of course, your lemons. Who could ask for anything more. As always, well done, & pl | Title: Continued Review
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 18:53 EDT
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that too. Whoever asked if u were on crack deserves a one way ticket to hell. I'd like to see them to try to pull talent out of their ass. Ignore those flames cause u are to good for them! Oh, btw, I've read Like, Like, Love too. Awhile ago, way before u started writing. It's cute but I try to ignore some of the idea's. I think Dee and Ryo move in together way too late. I like ur stories a lot better! So I just ignore that and believe urs is true! Is that silly of me? Oh well. lol Oh! I got one more question! What's gonna happen to Vones? U left me hanging! Now u gotta continue. More writing! More FAKE stories! I'm so greedy >< lol Well, I think I've blabbed enough to ya. Ur probably like "Will she ever shut up!?" Gomen. I tend to get carried away. Oh crap! I forgot to mention sumthin else...lmao. U know it was one of my fave parts too. I loved that Ryo got Dee the Kama Sutra. Now they got so many positions to explore! Bet u'll have fun writing those! lol Ok, now I'm gonna go. I can't wait to read more of ur future work. I'm really looking foward to it. Good luck Lisa *huggles* Love ya!
| Title: A Masterpiece By Far
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lisa, once again u've managed to create a beautiful FAKE story. Again u've left me speachless til the very end. I carefully read the whole story and was left amazed. The characters, the great plot, ur lemons, all wonderful! This story was fantastic! It also gave such a wonderful, holiday kind of feeling. U wrote out the characters feelings very well. I love watching Bikky and Carol's feelings grow and grow. Their scenes together were perfect. U just know they are meant for eachother. I love how the relationship between Ryo and Rose is friendly/brotherly now. A lot better then Rose's pursuing nature and u still managed to keep him in character. I love Dee and Bicky's scenes. They may say a lot of shit but u so know that they care about eachother. Oh by the way, i loved the part with Bikky and his presents. I thought of my brother right away and was left laughing. He was the same way. I also gotta say I adored the Christmas tree part. It left me with warm fuzzy feelings. It made me think that that was a real family right there. ^^ And of course, I love Dee and Ryo's scenes together. Full of emotions. All different kinds, but mostly true love. They were made for eachother and u can really see that through ur writing. I can clearly imagine their scenes together and boy do I get those damn warm fuzzies. U really do have a writing talent u know. U could really be a Sanami Matoh without a single doubt in my mind. Ur really that good!! And I'm sure many other people here realize
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