Title: I like it!
Reviewed By: Lady Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm new to the series so at first I thought you were hooking Amanda up with the guy with the purple hair. Had to do some checking, so I'm cool with the pairings esp. the Tezuka one. A couple of suggestions. Make it longer. It entirely too short. Amanda and Angela are going to make friends (and enemies) outside of the tennis team, right? I would love to see Fuji, Atobe, and the others hook up ,too. But not all of them cause that wouldn't seem realistic. I enjoyed it alot. Especially since most PoT/TnO fanfics are yoai. That's good and all ,but I get a little tired from it all. It's a breath of fresh air or whatever. Update soon!! =)
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