| "An Unforgettable Vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: June 25, 2005 18:08 CDT
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another well done chapter. hmm...sooo...Kouga in teh hot seat now, ain't he? something tells me his job is FAR from over. poor kag...falling off a motorboat at high speeds ain't fun...ain't an easy landing either. at least she doesn't have to worry about getting shot...just eaten by sharks. GREAT update, keep up the story!!!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 12:25 CDT
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OOOOOOOOOOO!!!Scary,well i really want to see wat happens so please please please update ASAP!!!=)!!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 12:21 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!!!ASAP PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU!!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 17:14 CDT
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Sagittariusgr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is soooooooo cool, i can't wait to see how the story plays out. Oh and are Sesshoumaru and Shippo going to be in it. *Jumps up and down like a three year old* please update soon, pretty please with sugar on top. LOL
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story!! It is on my favorites!!
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Reviewed By: psychotic_gun_wielding_bizatch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 00:17 CDT
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basically i just wanted to say this fic is great and i basically can't wait for the next chapter basically...(lol sry i just finished listening to George Lopez...what can i say ^-^...) newayz i just hope you update soon! i'll see you not right now, right now but later, later ^^
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Title: Some Constructive Critisium
Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 19:07 CDT
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Okay, your story is good but there is one thing that bugged me in the last chapter. When you introduced INuyasha feeling unworthy of himself you introduced it in to early, maybee you should talk about it later when he is actually in love with Kagome. Instead you could have just have Inuyasha complain to himslef of how much a b**h Kagome is (I know she's not but Inuaysha still thinks that now). Just some cronstructive critisuim. Anyhow I do like your story and I look foward to updates.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 17:03 CDT
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I love it. Getting better and better, but chapters are so short.... ;-)
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT On: June 20, 2005 15:54 CDT
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I'm loving this story please update as soon as you can because I have three words to describe this story and they are FAB - U - and LOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=p
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Reviewed By: Crumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Keh. I like Ramen." What a great way to let someone get to know you! I cracked a laugh on that one. This is a very interesting story so far, I hope you continue to update and let us get to know the gang better. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT On: June 17, 2005 16:09 CDT
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This story ish sooooooooo cool PLEASE update as SOON as you can please,please,please!!!!!!!!!!!=)!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very well done thus far. i enjoy the characters you have put together and their interactions are nothing short of halarious. very well done. the kagome yash side and his pet name of bitch is well done as well. got to say, you have my interest peaked with Naraku luring them all together. i'm interested to see what you do with this. keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so it's starting out really good! Keep up the good work can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Love it so far!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl On: June 14, 2005 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really hope you add more chapters -this one has LOTS of potential!
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