| "Advent of Glory" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyvani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done ... so far! I loved watching Princess Tutu when I discovered it recently, but I was left with the lingering wish/hope that sometime in the "future" Ahiru could come back for Fakir. She'd certainly seemed to enjoy being human, even if parts of it were confusing ... but hey, that's just part of being human for anyone!
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Title: when r u going to update
Reviewed By: Ketsuekiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and all....but I have one minor flaw to it.... It hasn't been updated in over a year...
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Reviewed By: CGUll_the_Wizpig [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It transitioned wonderfully from the end of the series into your story line. Beautifully written and it has a nice flow to it. There were one or two sentences where you used the same word twice instead of using a synonym for the second expression, but other than that the sentence variation and word placement was fantastic. It hooked me and I love it. Smooches-Wizzy
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Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm loving this! Your writing is eloquent and interesting and KEEP IT UP PLEASE! =D
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Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 10:10 CDT
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i'm so confused, is that it?? Why was she a girl? Ugh i hope you dont end it like that, to many unanswered questions
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Reviewed By: Tea kaiba 23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you everything 10 because this story is good a because it had me even wondering what was happening and poor Fakair because he was only thinking of Ahiru and that is so sweet please write more and I am reveiwing right now because this my first time comming to this website and reading your story so please I would love to read more about them and find out why Fakair did turn her back to her human form and they look so cute together yay^_^ can't wait for your update
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Reviewed By: poikaer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very impressed. You have an incredible style of writing, and I really got into your story. It's depressing that there's only one chapter... I'm not going to rush you to update, I know that good writing takes time, I just wanted to let you know that this is an amazing story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: LunarAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 16:12 CDT
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Very well-written and interesting. Just discovered Princess Tutu and I'm really enjoying it. Please continue this fic.
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Reviewed By: 4cherryblossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update your story! I would like to read more about it! I love it! it's great! update please!
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Reviewed By: Iris Anthe On: September 04, 2005 21:45 CDT
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Well Zap, I've been saving this for a rainy day... the unknown quantity of a Zapenstap story from a universe I don't know. This was great. Just what I needed. I know I love your writing, but now I really know it, because I enjoyed a story about characters I know no background on (well, very little, since I did check out your Princess Tutu site some months ago as preliminary to reading this). I wonder if you'll write more of this? I really enjoyed it and am intrigued. I'll read anything you write my dear. Your #1 fangirl, Iris
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Reviewed By: >rOnNie On: August 29, 2005 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great start and i hope you continue writing this stroy and update really soon! Pretty please? :)
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Reviewed By: KariAki On: July 26, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Please continue, we beg of you. sakura.ai@gmail.com and carlie.s@gmail.com... if you ever update, please notify us! We think that was so well written... yay for Princess Tutu! ^+^
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Reviewed By: Hitomi Brighteyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 21:54 CDT
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Nicely done, I'll be curious to see where you take this. It will be interesting to see the kind of effects, physical and emotional, Ahiru's newfound humanity has on her and how Fakir takes her unexpected reaction to his attempts at rewriting their situation. Keep up the good work.
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