| "Ruby And Silver" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story touched my heart. That's a gift, don't waist it
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Title: YOU ARE A MASTER
Reviewed By: Vignette On: September 09, 2005 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fiction so profound!!!! Never has such An Artistic Piece been Visioned!!!! The Emphasis in phantasm!!!! The joy in misty innuendo!!!! I was able to comprehend some aspects of your fic or so I believe. The mentions of blood is magical as portray it does of love, desire, life & death. When Hilary Kisses Kai she draws the venom in his life out yet also releases the serum to keep his life floating. His mind is quite the fantastical element - he responds to her in colours him the slighlty decayed in silver ash(memories so willing to fade yet remain as dust) whilst she the one in living Ruby (a sea of flowing blood). This is just my presumption of your tale of extraordinary - forgive my faults. YOU ARE SPECTACULAR!!!!! YOUR HEART IS A WILDERNESS OF WONDER!!!! YOU DO POSSESS THE ANGELIC INK FOR WRITING!!!! YOU ARE A WRITER TOO EXCLUSIVE TO BE SIMPLE DIAMOND SO YOU ARE THE ESSENCE OF ETHEREAL ELEMENTS!!!! Sorry to Frighten you (with my exclamations), BUT YOUR WORK HAS CAPTURED MY HEART!!!! NEVER DISMISS YOUR ARDENCY TO WRITE!!!!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Mewangel On: August 17, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww its sooo cute!In a creepy, hanting,confusing sort of way.... But anyway, great fic!
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Reviewed By: princess_leli [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a haunting fic!! it was nice the way hillary was a big help instead of annoying, but still it shure was cute :)
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Title: Love It
Reviewed By: devil_cup On: July 27, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!! Although it was confusing. But in a way I understood it.(I think?)It was amazing!! I mean the way it makes you feel...Eeven if you don't uderstand it.(trust me! My brother was almost tatlly lost!)
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Reviewed By: studio On: June 14, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This definitely deserves more reviews. I thought it was absolutely fantastic. Encore!!!!!!!!! (please.... don't make me poke you!)
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Kiyomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say i loved it. You should write more like this fanfic/poem. Anyway, it is sort of confusing , but thats what makes it so good. It leaves you to think...So keep it up!
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