| "THE WOLVES OF MUSHIYORI CITY" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: kitkatt On: July 02, 2005 17:40 CDT
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I'm glad I could finish reading this very nice fic before my moving. Once again I congratulate you because you wrote a fic that I really enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing it! Hugs, Kitkat.
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Reviewed By: Kitkatt On: June 25, 2005 18:28 CDT
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I can't believe you've made Amanuma do that for Yana. hahaha Great shot! You're doing great with this fic, the dialogues are flowing smoothly, so naturally it leaves me astounded. The characterizations are great also, even if I disagree a bit about Mitarai's character as I can't see him as a manipulative person, but as the manipulated. Still he could change given the circunstances. I'm really hooked by this story even if I use to refuse to read stories with OCs in it, but Hannah doesn't interfer in the story the way most OCs use to do. In fact I like her. I'm beeing forced to review my opinion about OCs after reading this story here and "Shattered Gates" by Vitaralastra(sp?). OCs doesn't bother me when they're really well planned and aren't the 'know it all' type. See you, Kitkat.
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Reviewed By: Kitkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 23:59 CDT
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I'm still reading it, but I can say that I just loved the fact that you put "the secondaries" to good use in this story. Their personalities are well built and the plot is very nice. I'll stay tuned for more. Kitkat
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