| "Spring Fever" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Willowseth On: August 18, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely HALARIOUS Fan fic! I loved it, you are a very good writer. You should really write more Naruto fics because this one was absolutely one of the most Halarious Naruto Fanfics I have read. I will definitely look at anything else you write. -Willowseth
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: July 10, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"You're not quite the pansy I thought you were; I've decided you're mean enough for me." I love it! Please write more Naruto fics! That was awesome! I'm glad that you don't write Iruka as a pathetic wuss like a lot of people do. I agree that while he can be a real softy with the kids (especially Naruto), he's also a ninja and has to be tough to have lived this long. And to take care of the kid who has the spririt of the demon who killed your parents is pretty tough. Sorry I didn't review earlier - my dad made me and my brothers evacuate for the hurricane and the darn thing didn't even come close to hitting us!
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: July 08, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the end, very cute. I think you got Iruka perfect.
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Reviewed By: amiko_16 On: June 16, 2005 04:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL Funny shit, hon ^_^ I was startled to see you were stepping out of the GW fandom XD But I like~
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 18:26 CDT
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Excellently written. Yes, I am quite aware about the teachers not being that caring and the like. ^_^ Very nicely written, shame this didnt get the spring award for this year. Hope fo see more Naruto fanfiction from you in the future!
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Reviewed By: Chin On: June 03, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was quite funny. Iruka truly has a good pair of lungs, and I can imagine it would take guts to teach future ninjas. Nice work. Why not post it on the Kakairu lj community? I'm sure they'd love it.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (nsi) On: June 02, 2005 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adored the way you wrote Iruka. I have to admit, mostly I love to see him weak, but the way you portrayed him was awesome. Loved it how he's not a pushover or a pansy in your fic. In fact, normally after reading a good dose of Iruka fics and then watching the anime, I'm terribly disillusioned. He's so sweet in the fics, and then when you watch the anime, (specially the scene where naruto turned into a sexy girl) he's bellowing and not at all the uke you'd think (though there is that one cute scene where he's blushing and scratching his nose when talking to Kakashi). So, yeah, this fic's made me want to rewatch my naruto, and I'm sure this time, I won't be disillusioned at all. I've watched up to 133, and don't worry, you've written a fantastic 'in character' fic for both Iruka and Kakashi!
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