| "Fushigi Yuugi: The Next Chapter" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: boyarina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! love it...when's the next update?
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Reviewed By: Miko Mistress01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**______** Luv luv luv this story and I hope you write more. Your writing is good, or typing in this case hehe. I can only draw it seems like. Well I hope you feel the urge to update soon cause this story ROCKS!!! Wish i could write a fushigi yuugi story but I like to type Inuyasha ones instead. Ja Ne Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Miko Mistress01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh will you please update soon, I keep reading the chapters over and over again!!! And are you going to do Ritsuka's profile?
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Title: Bishiglompah desu
Reviewed By: Shinsetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nee, Dee-san, Are you gonna add your other chappies, cause it gets quite confusing, no da. D:
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Title: Uh Oh
Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay qustion does Ritsuka really like killing them oh and why doesn't Kioior(sp) like killing is it because of her family. And is this gonna have the main girls fall for T/C? Well this chapter was good anyways
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Title: KAWAII-NESS
Reviewed By: Star-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
This is such a cute story I hope you update soon I think i'm in love with the story thats scary.
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Title: Finally here!
Reviewed By: roku kyu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 22:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, it's great to see this story up on this site! The thing I like best about your writing (besides the ever-important correct spelling and grammar) are your vivid depictions of all of your characters, both original and canon. Your Keisuke and Tetsuya are amusing and realistic, and Ritsuka and Kiori have distinct and engaging personalities. Tasuki and Chichiri are also fun and fascinating; I especially love the way you incorporate Tasuki's silly puns from his "Genrou Den" persona, and the way he doesn't hesitate to "Rekka Shin'en" Ritsuka when she mouths off to him one too many times. Most of all, you have that rare commodity--a complex and absorbing plot. The way that you used a different book to get the girls into the Universe of the Four Gods was an especially clever touch. I look forward to more chapters and to the further adventures of Ritsuka and Kiori along with Tasuki and Chichiri. Congratulations on a job well done--or well-started I should say!
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