| "Green Eyed Monster" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: Begging
Reviewed By: edlover101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a member of mediaminer for five years now and your story is by far the best story I've ever read.. I've had it on my favorites for a few years now and I still enjoy it so much.. but I'm begging you.. PLEASE finish it, dont leave me hanging. Everytime I come on here I have to check if you've written anymore because this story is phenominal, I just cant wait until you actually write more.. but sadly, this time when I checked it was still at that haunting chapter 16. I implore, please write more, as a huge fan of this fic I can not stand for it o end this way, I NEED to see this date between Ed and Roy, and seeing your amazing way of writing depict it would just make my day. Hope you read this and write ^_^ ~Edlover101
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Reviewed By: BloodyBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome. i love it please up date soon i want to see how this "Date" is going to go! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: chaosrising [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 21:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more. i want to see how the date goes.
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Reviewed By: crazy-chick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this story hahaha! so funny..hope u update soon,keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the way you wrote Ed's feelings about Al. You made it clear how much he cared about him but he's still sorta independent. Also, thank you for pairing Al with Winry instead of Ed. I really don't think Ed and Winry go together. I think you did a good job keeping them in character so far. Needs a little work in the grammar/spelling area, but overall you did a good job.
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Title: Ooh! Naughty!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens across the board! You rock! I can't wait to see what happens next and thank you so much for making Ed even more drool-worthy than he already is! You rule! ;)
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