| "Two Spirit Detectives!!!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: jj
Reviewed By: joony On: June 17, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name of character:kerena Age:15 Race:human Gender:female Your real name:jen Weapons she uses:body,and sword bio:you can pick the eyes and hair she only has one special attack and thats no one can lie to her she likes to sing and listen to music and has a vary random personality.you can add anything else you want to just dont make her the clone of botan and clothes can not include a thong ok!(shudder errrrrrrrrrr.) oh and email me to tell me wat you think and to ask to chang anything email is stupidlilfreakgirl17@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: gold moon On: June 09, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. it's really cool.hope you can update soon I can't wait.
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