| "Runaway" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: R&R
Reviewed By: mandy/kagome On: June 29, 2005 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story is one of the best i have ever read, i wish that u could have kept it going but anyways it rocks
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going really well. You kinda sounded repetative while explaining the whole kikyou/Inuyasha but thats prob just because I've seen those episodes so many times. I love the way you write by switching points of view of the characters. The imagery and details you use are wonderful and add a LOT to the story. You make it very realistic, it's almost like watching your story. You do a good job and showing us rather than telling us. I think your characters are just like how they acted at this time in the series, just lacking Miroku's lechery, but thats just a minor detail and there wasn't a good place to fit it in anyway. I hope you finish your story because I find it very enjoyable.
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Title: R&R
Reviewed By: Amanda R&R On: June 16, 2005 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story it is realing good, i think mabe u should make the demon that she saw koga/kouga and just wondering how many episode have u seen??? and i did not no were the R&R are sopost to go because this is my very first time ever review because i don't really like most of the storys that i read but i like yours very much
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Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT!? Awww maaan we're going to wait forever for another update! I mentioned before that not very many people review on this site. Does it help that I do? *puppy eyes* As for this chapter...*laughs* I guess you made me a lier. Inu does admit to mistakes this early on! *grins* As for Kags...well I guess she's going to be found sooner rather than later huh? She should have thought of something like that abit earlier. But she IS sick...so she gets concessions. Well hopefully this will get another update soon, regaurdless of so few reviews. Ja ne!
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Call me very mean...but I don't feel too sympathetic for her just now. She's just as bad as InuYasha with her own tempter! *grins* But at least SHE admits to things...unlike him most of the time. Especially around that time period in the storyline. He's finally opening up abit more in season 3-4.
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Jaw drops* Is she absolutely NUTS!? *shakes head* Yep, you kept Kagome pretty much in character there...she forgets that she's in a dangerous time period and just decides she's 'going to take a walk' till the others come get her. *heavy sigh* What is going to find her? Human or demon? Wait a sec...does she have the shards on her? That was not mentioned.
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Title: cH 2
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Huh...so you're following the series. This is before Sango is introduced and joins them. I'm surprised you had Miroku behave! *Grins* Till next one.
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice storyline idea. So far I haven't come across anything similar, (and I have read LOTS of InuYasha stories) as of yet anyway. Sorry to break it to you but this site not everyone is so eager to review. Maybe it's that crazy spam filter...makes it hard to post a review sometimes. Can get very discouraging. But it's a necessaty for this site I suppose. Good luck in getting as many as before.
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 11:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey i like this story please updåte soon
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Reviewed By: Kuragashi On: June 13, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Thats what you get for running away!
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Reviewed By: inu-hanyou2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool... I would really like it if Inuyasha doesn't come and find her.. Then Kagome would get all sad..hehehe... Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Hanyou On: June 11, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha can't even think with out someone getting angry with him. Great Story, I like it! =D
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