| "Midnight Machine 2" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
T_T why you no update????
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Title: Pwease
Reviewed By: Dogdemongal On: September 14, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES YOU REVEIWED AND I STILL LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE OH PRETTY GOD PLEASE KEEP UPDATING
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Title: midnight machine
Reviewed By: crzy144 On: September 13, 2005 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg update soon plz muah i luved it
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Title: midnight machine
Reviewed By: crzy144 On: September 13, 2005 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg update soon plz muah i luved it
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Title: Please I beggeth Aponeth a youeth
Reviewed By: Dogdemongurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE SOOM IM ABOUT TO GIVE UP
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Reviewed By: Becksters On: August 20, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THE STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: FF
Reviewed By: gimpys still kickin On: August 08, 2005 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!!!!!!!!!! you must keep updating it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: twinsnake1604 On: July 27, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally cool, and very typical of the characters to do that, other than that, absolutely hilarious
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Reviewed By: twinsnake1604 On: July 27, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally cool, and very typical of the characters to do that, other than that, absolutely hilarious
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Reviewed By: Inus Girl On: July 17, 2005 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok I think that Inuyasha should be her guide and please make him a punk sk8ter! Your story is going great so far except for the fact that you said she was 17 and then it says shes 15 along with the grade that shes in. Ne ways Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Yume The Forgetful On: June 19, 2005 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ummm...this story is pretty good so far. I really want to see how Kagome'll meet the other characters. I do have one thing to point out though. In Chapter one you said that Kagome was 17 and going to be in her senior year, but later in the story you said she was 15 and a sophmore(sp?). I just thought you'd like to know. I hope you'll update soon.
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