| "A Bump in the Road" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Yasu-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic! My favorite part would have to be Shigure's POV. He's so funny. Keep writing and stay happy! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 13:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi!!!! I think I might have reviewed this story on a different website, but my request stays the same...please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's a great story, and I want to know what happens next. How long is he going to stay a dog? How long before Tohru and the others find him? What happens?! The suspense is killing me....
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Reviewed By: Lady of Ithilien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was a *fabulous* tease of a prologue. Wonderful writing and spot-on characterization of Shigure - you managed some great insight on his character in just the prologue, not to mention a perfect description of his relationship with Akito in only one short paragraph. You've definitely piqued my interest. I can't wait to read more!
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