| "FAKE in Love: Act VIII, A Shot of Something Good" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2013 09:57 EDT
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What a nice oneshot collection! Something different, but I really like it. Especially the bits before Volume 7 - it's rare to read fanfiction that is set in the timeline of the mangas without changing the original storyline. Well done! :) |
Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are GOOD. 'Nuff said. (I'm reading your WHOLE series, I just thought ought to show my appreciation sometime...)
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Reviewed By: subzerotwin On: April 26, 2006 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, man we are so alike, I have read all the mangas like hundreds of times. I love Ryo too
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked "The Kiss" out of all of them the best. On Act IX. I may just have to shoot myself in the morning though because it's ten til 3 here.
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Reviewed By: evean On: July 06, 2005 07:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY agree with you on that subject - I hate unfinished fics too. So keep posting as you do, please. I like your Rose, he seems to be quite nice guy. And I like your lemons, graphic, yes, yet still tasty. And I like a lot of things in your stories, too many to count them. So again, thank you.
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Reviewed By: no one On: June 30, 2005 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say, i love every single story you write. this series is so much fun to read, and so creative and well-presented! i've actually laughed out loud at some points. keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: smirnoff On: June 24, 2005 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. that was amazing. This is my fifth time reading it.
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved these! Little slices of life showing brief glimpses of ordinary and not-so-ordinary moments they share. Fabulous as always!!!
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Title: Surprised Yet Again
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...just wow. Once again u've left me amazed. First off I have got to thank Michelle for giving the blindfolding idea to u! That was just pure passion. Left me speachless. God u know how to write lemons! Now ur short stories. I love all of them. Each of them are so special and important left out parts in FAKE. I loved how Ryo and Dee began to grow closer and closer and Dee finally admited to Ryo that he loved him. I loved how Ryo was finally realizing that he was falling for Dee and it scared him. All ended up better though in the end ne? ^^ I loved how Ryo admited to his Aunt Elena that he and Dee were an item and that he was gay. I wish that would have been in the manga...very touching. I LOVED the moving out part. The lemon was so sexy. Ryo is a moaner! =P The carnival was heart warming. That really was a good idea for his birthday. I liked the tunnel of love part ^^; Also the part when Ryo finally kissed Dee in public was great. I can picture it so clearly. And last but not least, chapter 7 was so cute. Loved it! Ur idea's for stories are excellent and I can't wait til I get to read more! Bring em on Lisa!! I'm ready for them!!! lol Again, loved these mini stories. Can't wait til ur next FAKE Act! Hope u get to update soon. Keep up the great work!!
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Title: Bliss - Pure Bliss
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Yay me! I'm first!) What a lovely bunch of stories you just gave us. I know it's in your habit to give us long story arcs, which we all ABSOLTUELY ADORE, but these one shots were pure bliss. Gentle, passionate, loving. Such fulfilling & sweet little treats in the lives of our favourite detectives. You answered so many questions about Dee & Ryo & filled in all of the little details so many of us readers have been dying to know. The first time Dee actually tells Ryo he loves him (A very important question I had always been wondering, surprised that Sanami had never included), Ryo telling his aunt about him & Dee. Ryo kissing Dee in public for the first time. & all of the other moments in their lives that helped to establish their relationship & bring them closer. Dee comforting Ryo when he was upset about forgetting his mom's birthday, not knowing why, but realizing that the one he loved was in pain & that being reason enough, in spite of all the bitterness & hurt Ryo threw at him. & then him realizing that still, the time wasn't right. That was some of the most well thought out, mature & wonderfully sensual writing I have ever come across. It was bliss, pure & simple. And once again, your lemons. WOW!!! Dee & Ryo saying a final goodbye to Dee's apartment. Ryo blindfolding Dee. Thank you. That was ABSOLTUELY AMAZING!!! Please keep up the good work, and if you ever want to grace us with a bunch of one shots again, PLEASE DO!! They |
